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jeremy's adventure part 2: Jeremy was in lyoko and his friends were shocked aelita said "j-jeremy is that you?" very scared "yes it's me" he said, yumi said "WHY? WHY DID YOU COME HERE!?" she said very angry.

"I-i-i want to be a hero.." he said sadly he thought they would be proud of him.

"A HERO!? TO WHO!?" she said more angry jeremy was sad so he ran away.

Odd said "HEY EINSTAIN WAIT!" "JEREMY COME BACK!" aelita said while she cried ulrich was mad at yumi he said "why did you yell at him?" he said "i thought you were his friend" yumi snapped and said "i-i am" "NO YOUR NOT" odd yelled at her.

Everyone was looking at aelita crying she said "jeremy was just trying to make us proud" she said yumi snapped thinking about him "jeremy i'm sorry" jeremy looked back thinking he is alone To Be continued
©2008-2009 ~codelyokoboy
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my 2nd story and its better i hope

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not bad try and make it longer ok?

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